Your new updates make me a very happy reader. You have an amazing grasp of the characters to me. The first scene with Buffy & the gang feels very authentic. Young Buffy is particularly good. What she says feels right, but even better how she says it sounds right. This goes for Dru's character too. She is written really well. You capture Dru's unpredictability which is what I believe makes Dru so frightening & fascinating. Getting Dru right gave her scene with Spike true suspense. Spike is superb as always.