Don't feel bad at all! It was beautifully written. I actually went back and read it again because it's such a wonderfully evocative scene. That last line is fantastic. It just makes me sob like a little girl. lol
Seriously, though, this is an absolutely wonderful story. I was so busy flailing over Minion that I didn't really get into the other stuff. Wayne's appearance, and Roxanne's subsequent mental comment on bravery, was fantastic! Owen is downright scary. Metro Man comes back from the dead to kick your ass, and you just start laughing? Time to run away! And he's just a kid! My hat is off to you, dear. I, too, am hoping your workload doesn't consume all your free time, because this story is one of the two or so that I consider my absolute favorite. :)
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Date: 2011-10-11 01:02 am (UTC)Seriously, though, this is an absolutely wonderful story. I was so busy flailing over Minion that I didn't really get into the other stuff. Wayne's appearance, and Roxanne's subsequent mental comment on bravery, was fantastic! Owen is downright scary. Metro Man comes back from the dead to kick your ass, and you just start laughing? Time to run away! And he's just a kid! My hat is off to you, dear. I, too, am hoping your workload doesn't consume all your free time, because this story is one of the two or so that I consider my absolute favorite. :)